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Ring O' Roses - Draft 4 by Fiona Hunnisett, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 03 Oct '16 14:23

A teacher's duty never ends.

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This is a heart-wrenching moment exploring the idea of a teacher’s duty to her students, as well as to her family.

  • We think that the script would work better with the deletion of the final section, from “Lisa glances at the clock” onwards. If you do want to keep the references to Ring-a-ring o’ roses in, we felt that this would be less on the nose if the children were to play it in the background while she is on the phone.
  • Some of the dialogue could be tightened.

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. A very touching story. Well done, Fiona! 

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Ring O' Roses - Draft 3 by Fiona Hunnisett, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 17 Dec '15 09:12

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Ring O' Roses - Draft 2 by Fiona Hunnisett, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 11 Aug '15 14:25 @FHunnisett

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- Draft 1 by Fiona Hunnisett, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 15 Apr '15 15:22

A teacher's duty never ends.

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