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Daddy's Fort - Draft 4 by Cera Rose Pickering, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 07 Jun '16 13:54

A father makes sure his two little girls are blissfully unaware of their impending fate.

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This really pulled at our heart strings, and has added poignancy when we consider hard-working fathers who don’t always have enough time for their children day-to-day.

  • We think the first sections can be slimmed down.
  • Other scripts in the final 50 are set in forts / tents, and we suggest the “fort” here be changed to the parents’ bed (duvet) or similar.

 Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. A touching tale about a father and his daughters. Well done!

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Daddy's Fort - Draft 3 by Cera Rose Pickering, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 18 Aug '15 12:21

A father makes sure his two little girls are blissfully unaware of their impending fate.

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Daddy's Fort - Draft 2 by Cera Rose Pickering, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 11 Jun '15 14:26

A father makes sure his two little girls are blissfully unaware of their impending fate.

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Daddy's Fort - Draft 1 by Cera Rose Pickering, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 08 Jun '15 15:40

A father makes sure his two little girls are blissfully unaware of their impending fate.

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