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Fossils - Draft 4
written for The Impact:50,
uploaded 05 Jul '16 16:26
Eleven year-old Ellie wants answers to the big question, but will her Mum Jane give her the answer wants, or the one that they both need?
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This is a nice exploration of one way a parent might explain the impending disaster to their child, and how rational science can also be used to come to terms with the end.
- Although it would make for a nice visual, we felt that the plasticine at the beginning didn’t work that well and we suggest that the scene begin with Ellie glaring out of the window.
- In general the dialogue could be trimmed down while still retaining the same core message.
Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. A very fresh, relevant take on the theme, and one which shows humanity transcending religion. Nice work, Mondo!