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T-MINUS - Draft 4 by Carolyn Goodyear, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 02 Aug '16 17:25

A boy and his mum are in their homemade spaceship awaiting lift off for their holiday to heaven.

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This was a beautifully written scene, and emotionally resonant.

  • One pill is not enough; she needs to say “pills” and “Make sure you take them all. Good boy” etc.

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. They could be curled up together, unconscious by this point. Nice work!

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T-MINUS - Draft 3 by Carolyn Goodyear, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 04 Jan '16 14:25

A boy and his mum are in their homemade spaceship awaiting lift off for their holiday to heaven.

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T-MINUS - Draft 2 by Carolyn Goodyear, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 29 Dec '15 19:21

A boy and his mum are in their homemade spaceship awaiting lift off for their holiday to heaven.

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T-MINUS - Draft 1 by Carolyn Goodyear, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 02 Aug '15 19:02

A boy and his mum are in their homemade spaceship awaiting lift off for their holiday to heaven.

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