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Rock. Paper. Scissors - Draft 4 by Ben Marshall, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 08 Jun '16 21:21

You tell him. No you! Two boys decide who should tell their father.

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Producers' notes

This has echoes of Stand By Me, and handled well will be a very powerful little drama.

  • Further meaning could be drawn out by showing a subtle rite of passage, as Shaun goes from boy to man, forgives his dad, and takes charge with his younger brother
  • We didn’t know what the sentence “Billy swallows Dad’s drunken snore” meant, and think this should be deleted.
  • We would like to see Billy and Shaun go up to the park in the final scene and e.g. sit on the bench and eat crisps and wait for the end.

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. This is kick in the gut stuff – well done!

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Rock. Paper. Scissors (formerly Paper. Scissors. Rock) - Draft 3 by Ben Marshall, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 16 Nov '15 07:06

You tell him. No you! Two boys decide who should tell their father.

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Paper. Scissors. Rock - Draft 2 by Ben Marshall, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 28 Aug '15 22:19

You tell him. No you! Two boys decide who should tell their father.

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Paper. Scissors. Rock - Draft 1 by Ben Marshall, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 06 Aug '15 20:37

You tell him. No you! Two boys decide who should tell their father.

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