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A Special Day - Draft 5 by michele florea, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 28 May '16 11:29

A lone young woman and a little girl find each other and share a very special treat.

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Producers' notes

We like the pace of this story and the back story with the dead mum.

  • Remove brands and replace with generic
  • Remove water turtles and replace with ‘the world’ to accommodate filmmakers
  • Change one of the names as they sound similar
  • Trim the dialogue around the nap and try and take a little ‘off the nose’, the audience will get what has happened with less explanation
  • Could cut the dad reference as once we figure out she is alone, we get it and the girl can ‘step in’

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. Well done, we all felt it was very emotional.

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A Special Day - Draft 4 by michele florea, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 06 Jan '16 22:00

A lone young woman and a little girl find each other and share a very special treat.

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A Special Day - Draft 3 by michele florea, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 28 Aug '15 14:00

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A Special Day - Draft 2 by michele florea, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 24 Aug '15 17:43

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A Special Day - Draft 1 by michele florea, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 24 Aug '15 17:18

A lone young woman and a little girl find each other and share a very special treat.

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