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Till Death Do Us Part - Producers Feedback - Draft 4 by Roscoe Kleinloog (Roscoe), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 15 Aug '16 15:38

A grandmother, suffering from dementia, with her caring husband, share their last moments on earth struggling with the aged disease before the impact of the meteor.

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Producers' notes

This is a very touching script about an elderly man looking after his wife who is suffering from dementia.

  • Remove any references to branded items e.g. Afternoon Delight
  • Gerard’s reaction to Bess’s sudden lucidity does not feel right, as in reality she would have had other periods of lucidity before this instance. Consider how he would react to her confusion, having dealt with similar situations in the past. We think it likely he would still say the same things, however, his physical reactions would be different e.g. he wouldn’t look bewildered or drop the glass. We suggest this be rewritten to make it more authentic.

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. Well done, great work! 

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Till Death Do Us Part - Draft 3 - Draft 3 by Roscoe Kleinloog (Roscoe), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 19 Oct '15 13:08

A grandmother, suffering from dementia, with her caring husband, share their last moments on earth struggling with the aged disease before the impact of the meteor.

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Till Death Do Us Part - Draft 2 by Roscoe Kleinloog (Roscoe), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 10 Oct '15 18:45

A grandmother, suffering from dementia, with her caring husband, share their last moments on earth struggling with the aged disease before the impact of the meteor.

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Till Death Do Us Part - Draft 1 by Roscoe Kleinloog (Roscoe), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 26 Aug '15 20:00 @RoscoeKleinloog

A grandmother, suffering from dementia, with her caring husband, share their last moments on earth struggling with the aged disease before the impact of the meteor.

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