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Can She See Us, Daddy? - Draft 4 by Carole Trowbridge (Carole Parsons), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 12 Jun '16 16:21

A dad strives to give his kids a happy ending.

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Producers' notes

This is a very poignant moment, which utilises the ISS without it becoming an overarching dramatic contrivance.

  • If possible, try and rewrite the story without the rocket-shaped tent as this will be hard for filmmakers to source and to film. Can they imagine a spaceship around them in some other place?
  • For production purposes, consider merging the two children into one character.
  • We think that the blinding flash ought to be removed, as this would happen at impact (i.e. before the earthquake), and we would like to retain as much flexibility as possible when it comes to ordering the short films into the final feature.

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. We really felt for these characters, and loved the final “twist”. Well done! 

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Can She See Us, Daddy? - Draft 3 by Carole Trowbridge (Carole Parsons), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 03 Jan '16 15:52

A dad strives to give his kids a happy ending.

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Can She See Us, Daddy? - Draft 2 by Carole Trowbridge (Carole Parsons), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 01 Sep '15 17:30

A dad strives to give his kids a happy ending.

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Can She See Us, Daddy? - Draft 1 by Carole Trowbridge (Carole Parsons), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 27 Aug '15 15:58

A dad strives to give his kids a happy ending.

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