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Promised Land - Draft 4 by KT Parker (KT Parker), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 18 Aug '16 20:49

After a perilous voyage, a refugee reaches Europe's shores.

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This is very topical, with the added irony that the characters have survived a perilous journey only to face certain death by asteroid.

  • We felt that much of the dialogue could be cut and that the central message could be imparted almost entirely visually
  • Consider losing the monastery (this will give the filmmakers more flexibility in terms of location or the need for special effects) and making the monks ordinary people, perhaps with someone wearing a dog collar if you want to retain this dichotomy of religions.

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. A very fresh, relevant take on the theme, and one which shows humanity transcending religion. Great work!

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Promised Land - Draft 3 by KT Parker (KT Parker), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 07 Jan '16 08:29

After a perilous voyage, a refugee reaches Europe's shores.

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Promised Land - Draft 2 by KT Parker (KT Parker), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 01 Sep '15 10:28

After a perilous voyage, a refugee reaches Europe's shores.

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Promised Land - Draft 1 by KT Parker (KT Parker), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 31 Aug '15 00:53 @lunaperla

After a perilous voyage, a refugee reaches Europe's shores.

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