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The Travelers - Draft 3 by Matt Giannini, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 19 Oct '16 13:30

Marty is forced to convince his skeptical brother, Paul, that he has a first-class ticket off the planet before the destruction.

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Producers' notes

Original take on the theme. We want to believe…

  • We think references to Paul’s family (Karen etc.) should be removed, and replaced with “Isn’t there something better we could be doing?” etc.
  • Tighten dialogue – we think it could be at least 25% shorter
  • We should be left believing that a spaceship might be coming, not with the certainty that they are lunatics

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. Well done! 

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The Travelers - Draft 2 by Matt Giannini, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 06 Jan '16 18:52

Marty is forced to convince his skeptical brother, Paul, that he has a first-class ticket off the planet before the destruction.

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The Travelers - Draft 1 by Matt Giannini, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 25 Sep '15 00:31

Marty is forced to convince his skeptical brother, Paul, that he has a first-class ticket off the planet before the destruction.

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