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Sirtaki v03 - Draft 3 by Vera Mark, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 16 Oct '16 14:24

If you are in a sunny place, waiting for the most splendiferous crash of all times, there's only one thing to do - dance.

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This is very visually appealing, and the absence of dialogue is a nice contrast.

  • Remove the reference to Greece. Ideally, scripts shouldn’t be limited to a particular place, to make them more accessible to filmmakers in different parts of the world.
  • We felt that this could be cut down while retaining the core concept. 

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. This felt very unique. Well done, Vera!

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Sirtaki - Draft 2 by Vera Mark, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 27 Dec '15 17:34

If you are in a sunny place, waiting for the most splendiferous crash of all times, there's only one thing to do - dance.

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Sirtaki - Draft 1 by Vera Mark, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 27 Sep '15 08:49 @VeraMark2010

If you are in a sunny place, waiting for the most splendiferous crash of all times, there's only one thing to do - dance.

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