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Inside The Piano Shop - Draft 5 by Lisa Parry, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 20 Jul '16 14:43

Away from her husband and children, Jackie embraces her gift once more before the asteroid strikes.

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Producers' notes

We liked this simple and poignant idea.

  • We think the scene would play better if the owner were more of a sympathetic character, rather than a comedy one, and think the references to a hoax et cetera should be removed
  • Remove the reference to her children. This is an over-explanation of why she hasn't played for a long time, and we think this can be left to the audience's imagination
  • Consider having the owner open the door of the shop at the end, so that passers-by stop and listen
  • Alternatively could the piano be wheeled into the street?

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: for when the blast wave hits them. Well done!

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Inside The Piano Shop - Draft 4 by Lisa Parry, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 18 Jul '16 20:11

Away from her husband and children, Jackie embraces her gift once more before the asteroid strikes.

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Inside The Piano Shop - Draft 3 by Lisa Parry, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 08 Nov '15 07:09

Away from her husband and children, Jackie embraces her gift once more before the asteroid strikes.

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Inside The Piano Shop - Draft 2 by Lisa Parry, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 03 Nov '15 13:51

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Inside The Piano Shop - Draft 1 by Lisa Parry, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 29 Sep '15 12:42 @lisafparry

Away from her husband and children, Jackie embraces her gift once more before the asteroid strikes.

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