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Neverland - Draft 3 by Kathy Barrilleaux, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 10 Dec '15 16:10

A cop and an engineer test a dream

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Producers' notes

This script has a lovely fairytale-like quality, and is a unique take on the theme.

  • Trim the dialogue down.
  • We suggest ending the scene after “they lift off”, as this will make the film easier to produce for filmmakers with a limited budget.

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. This is a quirky tale which manages to create an upbeat tone at the end of the world.

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Neverland - Draft 2 by Kathy Barrilleaux, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 11 Nov '15 20:40

A cop and an engineer test a dream

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Neverland - Draft 1 by Kathy Barrilleaux, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 30 Oct '15 00:40

A cop and an engineer test a dream

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