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No Connection, Try Again Later - Draft 4 by Jacqueline Swift (Jaye L Swift), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 31 May '16 16:48

Alex and Sam, best mates, try to come to terms with the end of the word (redraft after Producers' Notes)

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Producers' notes

This is a lovely concept for a film, and will be very accessible to new filmmakers.

  • Rewrite removing all reference to gender / and “HIS Best Friend” to “Best Friend”
  • Rename characters with genderless names
  • We felt like it would benefit from a more human emotional beat – it is the end of the world

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. We like the idea of playing the blast wave out on the phone, saying “No Connection”. Really great, innovative work, you should be very proud and this will make a standout short film. 

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No Connection, Try Again Later - Draft 3 by Jacqueline Swift (Jaye L Swift), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 03 Jan '16 18:48

Alex and Sam, best mates, try to come to terms with the end of the word (redraft after Producers' Notes)

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No Connection, Try Again Later - Draft 2 by Jacqueline Swift (Jaye L Swift), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 13 Dec '15 18:02

Alex and Sam, best mates, try to come to terms with the end of the word (redraft after Producers' Notes)

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No Connection, Try Again Later - Draft 1 by Jacqueline Swift (Jaye L Swift), written for The Impact:50, uploaded 31 Oct '15 14:34 @Jaye__Swift

Alex and Sam, best mates, try to come to terms with the end of the word (redraft after Producers' Notes)

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