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Outside - Draft 5 by Sarah Christou, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 03 Aug '16 07:39

On the day the world ends, Tracy decides to face her phobia of the outside.

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Producers' notes

This was a well-observed story about a woman overcoming agoraphobia at the end of the world.

  • We would like to see a more compelling reason why Ben would choose to visit. Is there a more significant relationship between them?
  • Consider having a bigger build up to the moment Tracy goes outside.

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. An interesting and unique perspective. Great work!

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Outside - Draft 4 by Sarah Christou, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 30 Jul '16 12:37

On the day the world ends, Tracy decides to face her phobia of the outside.

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Outside - Draft 3 by Sarah Christou, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 07 Jan '16 11:19

On the day the world ends, Tracy decides to face her phobia of the outside.

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Outside - Draft 2 by Sarah Christou, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 05 Jan '16 13:00

On the day the world ends, Tracy decides to face her phobia of the outside.

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Outside - Draft 1 by Sarah Christou, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 20 Nov '15 13:00

On the day the world ends, Tracy decides to face her phobia of the outside.

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