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Just Right - Draft 1 by Alan Evans, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 06 Jan '16 05:20

A hermit seeks companionship before death

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Producers' notes

This is very effective, with an unusual character, some nice dark humour, and no dialogue.

  • We were looking for a little further clarification as to the exact nature of this story. Is it about a guy who wants some connection at the end of the world, but would prefer a dog’s company to people’s? Or is the dog his own? Why does he only release the one dog?
  • Drop the complex nature of the dogs injuries as this will make it hard for filmmakers.

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. This is really nicely-drawn – great work!