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Thicker Than Water - Draft 2 by Catherine Arton, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 07 Jan '16 22:27

As the world is about to end, 10 year olds, Josh and Matt learn that 'The ties that bind' are not always clear-cut.

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Producers' notes

We really like the set-up with the two “blood-brothers”, but felt that the running away from parents was a little bit mean.

  • We would recommend taking the parents out altogether and starting with a break out / rescue from a foster home / care home
  • This then expands on the “brothers reunited” aspect, which is a great one
  • Remove branded products and replace with generic ones

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. Look forward to reading the next draft. 

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Thicker Than Water - Draft 1 by Catherine Arton, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 06 Jan '16 17:08 @CatherineArton

As the world is about to end, 10 year olds, Josh and Matt learn that 'The ties that bind' are not always clear-cut.

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