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East Valley Rhinos - Draft 2 by Richard Anthony Dunford, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 07 Jan '16 19:57

A rugby team go back for their injured team mates.

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Producers' notes

This is a fresh take on the theme, and flies in the face of expectations nicely.

  • We suggest that the first half page be rewritten to reduce the amount of “tech speak” and to provide a clearer story set-up. The jargon makes it harder to understand for many.
  • Make the patient’s illness generic, to give the filmmakers more flexibility.

Remember to write a line with a CUT TO: For when the blast wave hits them. This script has a lot of heart. Well done!

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Easy Valley Rhinos - Draft 1 by Richard Anthony Dunford, written for The Impact:50, uploaded 06 Jan '16 22:19 @Kerzam_Inc

A rugby team go back for their injured team mates.

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